Tuesday, 10 February 2015

carys waitagi day


  1. Carys lovely because you added very cool photos except you might want to get more information like who else signed the treaty and I liked how you mentioned the chiefs

  2. Excellent cover carys
    F.B: I liked the way that you put pictures of the chiefs / because the other pictures that go with the writing helps us understand.
    F.F: I think you could work on better words than everyone else.
    I learned about who were the chiefs and understood your work clearly


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