Tuesday, 3 March 2015

The Funny Cat and Dog story





boom, bang, crash I'm sitting on the kitchen table, watching the chubby ovule head called raw the cat, digging the do's face like he's from the devil. also raw was like he was trying to kill my dog. raw was like go back to you own house the cat raw was digging  more and more in my dog's face.the cat was like I hate this dog. 


by Ashlee

4 comments:

  1. Maybe next time you should use capital letters

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  2. strong words using name for pets liked how you said boom boom and cool tittle

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  3. Great work Ashlee that was awesome but this sentence did not make sense raw was like go back to you own house the cat raw was digging more and more in my dogs face. And there are a few mistakes in this piece of writing.

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  4. I relay like the way you have use a lot of doing words.Next time you should use more capertill leetters.

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