Tuesday, 3 March 2015

Bang! bang! went the blinds smashing together as the cat punches the dog in the eyes. the cat tells the dog to go away.The cats eyes scare the life out of the dog.

7 comments:

  1. I like how you did the success criteria (adjective verb noun)feed ford you didn't highlight the others.

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  2. awesome onomatopoeia but describe why the curtains are banging against each other

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  3. i like how you used onomatopoeia
    so well done
    dannielle

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  4. i like how you used onomatopoeia
    so well done
    dannielle

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