Monday, 2 March 2015

dog vs cat

Scatter,Sprint,Scatter! As my cats bony legs pounce off the window sill to make a deadly harsh sneak attack on my dog.

slonk,slash,slap! As this cat jumps around my dogs face like the joker is waving kryptonite, infront of super man exept punching him as well.

2 comments:

  1. Nice story Alex.
    I like your onematapeas. Your also describing what's happening.
    What you need to work is on putting your capitals in the right place and try make your writing a bit longer.

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  2. Nice story Alex.
    I like your onematapeas. Your also describing what's happening.
    What you need to work is on putting your capitals in the right place and try make your writing a bit longer.

    ReplyDelete

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