Tuesday, 3 March 2015

The Canon Cat

Meow!!,Meow!!,Meow!! a white fluffy thing cums shooting out of the blinds making them wobble side to side.That white fluffy thing was a cat sharp ears, blue eyes and i was 
watching my dog but suddenly the cat started to damage my dogs face.

His face and eyes move side to side as he swipes.My dog just does not move a single bit!!.

5 comments:

  1. I like the way you use avtivse keeped on working like that

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  2. I like how you used the word Meow like the cat.

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  3. I think that I should work on extending vocaluary and more ideas,and I really like my story otherwise

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  4. I think that I should work on extending vocaluary and more ideas,and I really like my story otherwise

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  5. I love when you write white fluffy thing and it was a cat

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