Tuesday, 3 March 2015

The cats big fight

HI YA!white sharp claws fire out the wiggling white blinds.POW!POW!POW! my poor dog is getting bloody holes in his strong white and brown.Over and over again and again man the cats paws are to strong and evil.
"I thought to myself this is going to be a wacky Wednesday.Then the dog tries to doge the cats powerful hits.Later the cats ears started pointing up strait and the cats mouth started rising up and screamed at the poor dog then the cat setled down. Then the cat walked misteriosly back into the wiggling blinds.                                                                                                                                                  

1 comment:

  1. you needed to highlight the ajectives, nouns, and verbs


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