Tuesday, 3 March 2015

the terrible fight.

The terrible fight

Meow, Meow, Meow,all of the sudden a cat jumps out from behind the blinds.


The spiky white teeth hiss at the dog as the cat makes its move.Sharp claws destroy the dogs big,beautiful face.It's blue shiny eyes stare at the dogs recked face as the cat makes one last  move.


"This is my house now"meow the mysterious cat.WOW! that was one weird and wacky Saturday.



By Dannielle 

2 comments:

  1. i like the way you are using interesting words in your story and i like your title called the terrible fight

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