Tuesday, 5 May 2015

interesting intro.

'Look look' 'look what i can do with these plates'. Do you think we should have a circus at school?  


Success Criteria (please comment based on these, so that we know what we can change to make it more powerful for you).
1) We HOOK the audience using dialogue, a description or a sound effect.
2)We may include a rhetorical question
3) We then have a clear statement about what we are persuading the audience to do, which includes imperatives.

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