Tuesday, 5 May 2015

power full introion

WOW!that's so amazing the circus at.school do you like the circus it is so.cool we miss out lurning we sould have the circus evry day at school.                                                             
Success Criteria (please comment based on these, so that we know what we can change to make it more powerful for you).
1) We HOOK the audience using dialogue, a description or a sound effect.
2)We may include a rhetorical question
3) We then have a clear statement about what we are persuading the audience to do, which includes imperatives.

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