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Have you seen clowns and lions going crazy everywhere at the Circus?Well you should never ever go to a Circus in your life even while your at SCHOOL!!!
WALT create a powerful introduction for our speech Success Criteria (please comment based on these, so that we know what we can change to make it more powerful for you). 1) We HOOK the audience using dialogue, a description or a sound effect. 2)We may include a rhetorical question3) We then have a clear statement about what we are persuading the audience to do, which includes imperatives