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All blog posts from students are student owned. Meaning, presentation and editing is student orientated. Please help us by giving us feedback (what you like i.e. I like the strong nouns you have used in your writing) and feed forward (what we might work on in order to make our writing easier for you, the reader).
WALT create a powerful introduction for our speechSuccess Criteria (please comment based on these, so that we know what we can change to make it more powerful for you).
1) We HOOK the audience using dialogue, a description or a sound effect.
2)We may include a rhetorical question3) We then have a clear statement about what we are persuading the audience to do, which includes imperatives.
"Yuck get this chicas junk off".Have you ever gone to a chicas a lot in your learning time? School should be for learning not daycare but a treat now and then should be good