Tuesday, 5 May 2015

Riley's Powerful introduction

''Bang Boom Crash''.Wops a spinning plate dropped have you ever been to the circus is so fun and today i am going to tell you why we should have the circus here at our school everyday. 

WALT create a powerful introduction for our speech

Success Criteria (please comment based on these, so that we know what we can change to make it more powerful for you).
1) We HOOK the audience using dialogue, a description or a sound effect.
2)We may include a rhetorical question
3) We then have a clear statement about what we are persuading the audience to do, which includes imperatives.

1 comment:

  1. hi i love it its good maybe next time maybe make it more powerfull


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