Tuesday, 5 May 2015

"Who wanted to see a rubbish magic trick"laughed the circus man.Do you want the circus at school every day.I believe that the circus should come to school every day.

Success Criteria (please comment based on these, so that we know what we can change to make it more powerful for you).
1) We HOOK the audience using dialogue, a description or a sound effect.
2)We may include a rhetorical question
3) We then have a clear statement about what we are persuading the audience to do, which includes imperatives.

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