Sunday, 26 July 2015

ABCD By Alex.H. Riley.W

3 comments:

  1. I really like the way you used some pitchers in your work.Next time you should put full stops and capital letters.

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  2. F:B I liked how you told the audience what you where going to try and change in the school and how.
    F:F Try to use capital letters and full stops before and after a sentence.
    Nice Job!

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  3. FB I liked you way how it was not just words an i can visulise it with the pictures
    FF Capital letters and full stops

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