Thursday, 23 July 2015

Review on Crystal Mountain By Varshana

                                  CRYSTAL MOUNTAIN                                                       

Crystal Mountain is a eye-catching place, where you can enjoy some quality time with your family and friends together.


Crystal Mountain is a shop & theme park in Henderson, Auckland,New Zealand.


It is filled with many crystals and minerals from all around the world they also come in different Shapes and Sizes such as birthstones,minerals,crystals,and many more pendents.


The theme park is filled with lots of farm animals,rides,also there are many activities like panning for crystals,Travis the tractor ride, Pony ride,Crystal Mt Express train, Bungy Trampoline,Dinosaur Gully and many more activities for you and your family to enjoy.

I enjoyed my trip to Crystal Mountain and I hope you do too. 

Overall,Crystal Mountain is an interesting,entertaining destination for families to hangout and relax.

I would rate Crystal mountain as:

5 Stars for Fun

3 Stars for Food

5 Stars for Shopping

4 Stars for the Theme park 

Thanks 

Varshana




6 comments:

  1. FF: Next time you could add a space between a comma and the next word. Also in the first sentence it would make more sense if you wrote 'Crystal Mountain is an eye-catching place'
    FB: That you rated it so we would know if we want to go there now i really want to go there.,

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  2. FF:It would be better if you said crystal mountain is an eye catching place.
    FB: I like how use used full stops and capital letters.

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  3. FF:It would be better if you said crystal mountain is an eye catching place.
    FB: I like how use used full stops and capital letters.

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  4. FB: I like how it all makes sense and you're not persuading me to go there. And you have rated some topics based on Crystal Mountain.
    FF: Make sure there aren't any missing letters!!

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  5. FB: I like how you kept on topic and I can visualise clearly.
    FF: maybe you can put spaces after a commer.

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    1. thanks guys i can now make some changes with your F.B and F.F

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